Critique

Critique

By David Milligan-Croft

.

Don’t give me

That look.

The one that says

How disappointed

You are

In me.

I see it

All the time.

It’s your default

Expression.

Maybe try

A little positive

Reinforcement

Every once

In a while.

You never know,

It might just work

On you too.

Rather than being 

So judgemental.

.

Sometimes,

I wish

I’d never bought

That damned

Mirror.

.

5 Comments

Filed under Art, Contemporary Arts, Creativity, Ideas, Inspiration, mental health, Poetry, Uncategorized, Writing

5 responses to “Critique

  1. JMN

    Permit me to say, I admire your adroit phrasing and how the trim lineation distributes it. The surprise ending lands forcefully.

  2. Beautiful lines! So true! Well shared thanks 👍👍

  3. Each line is easy to read and bears a story and feeling of their own. Wonderful !

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