
I have built a place for you.
By David Milligan-Croft.
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I have built a special place for you
in the corner of my mind.
Where I can simultaneously feel
happy and forlorn.
.
I go there when I want to be alone
with you. We sit in the shade of a cherry blossom tree.
Scintillating sun flickering through the branches.
Monarch butterflies flit through the air,
as pink petals fall like snowdrops.
.
There is a shallow stream
burbling over rocks, carving through a vale
of lush, verdant grass, abundant
with iridescent wildflowers.
.
Your head is on my shoulder;
I can smell honeysuckle in your russet hair,
feel your heart beating
against my rib cage.
.
Warmth radiates through your skin
into my fingertips. Stroking the soft down
of your arm. Breathing you in.
This is the closest I can get
.
without crawling inside of you.
I close my eyes and feel the heat of our star
on my face. Everything is ecstasy.
And we stay in paradise forever. Or,
.
until it’s time for me to go.
And I leave you there,
beneath our tree, shielding your eyes
from the sun, waving me goodbye.
.
And I go back to reality,
where you are oblivious
to my existence.
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Beautiful spot in your imagination.
Thank you, that’s very kind. It’s an amalgam of different places I have visited.
🤩🙏🌅
Love
Thank you Envision Eden, I am most grateful.
Very welcome David, I wish you a peaceful Holy Season.
Your poem touches me. Rhythmic, delicate, well wrought. Scintallating photos too.
Thank you JMN, that is very kind of you to say and much appreciated.
I’ve discovered a month later on glancing at this thread that I misspelled “scintillating”! How embarrassing.
And just as embarrassing that I didn’t spot it!
Our embarrassments are offsetting, and we’re cleansed! Kind regards.
Awesome selection of words, very well written and decorated by Images
Thank you for your kind words, I am most humbled.
Your mind is so rich with imaginations of LOVE and beautiful places !
Thank you BG! That really means a lot. If that’s what came across, I achieved what I set out to achieve.
Beautiful loving lines ‘ I close my eyes and feel the heat of our star”! Well written thanks.👍
Thank you so much, Priti, that’s very kind of you. (Also, thank you for noticing the ‘star’ line. I was pleased with that.) 🙂
Thank you
What a wonderful expression “I have a place built for you” is.
Thank you Josie, I really appreciate that. 😊
Such beautiful imagery, I love this so much
Thank you Jennifer. Your kind words mean a lot.
It’s my pleasure, of course 🙂